The Lifebook Online program I'm working on has pre-recorded coaching calls with Jon & Missy Butcher. I would like to ask either Jon or Missy a question, but their contact information isn't provided in this program.

I've written a lot for most of the Premise, Vision, Purpose, and Strategy sections of the categories I completed. I wrote paragraphs amounting to a short essay for the PVPS sections. I think that the more words I write the more weight I put on the section. However, short and sweet sounds nice. Should I condense my thoughts to a certain number of sentences to make it more memorable?

I also borrowed many inspirational quotes from the bonus resources and ones I found on the Internet. Should I not use many quotes from other people in a Lifebook that's about me, my ideas, and my beliefs?

Does anyone in this group have any advice or suggestions for me?